[asksam]

OK, this is my first lesbian story, and I kind of need to know if I am going in the right direction. Its ok to be brutal! I need real responses please!! Thank you!!







The first time we made love, she covered my breasts in amber honey. Her small, pink tongue lapped it oh so gently. It was like my breasts were flowers and she was a butterfly, taking small careful sips of nectar. She took her time, glancing at me from time to time, gaging the affect she was having. By the time the honey covered only my nipples, my hands were fisted in the sheets and there was a fine sheen of sweat covering my face. She wanted me to be still and not to make any noise, I, who fidgeted when relaxed, and who moaned and gasped my way through mediocre sex. It was only later that she truly appreciated how well behaved I was then. Now she began using her small white teeth to scrape and nip at me. God, it felt good. Her fingers wandered down drawing circle on my skin. Every time she drew near my aching clit, I arched, but she never quite touched it. Damn tease! Suddenly, she sat up and grinned at me. She let down her long black hair and dip some of it into the jar of honey. Using her hair like a paint brush, she drew swirling designs down my stomach and across my thighs. With an angelic smile she slowly lowered her hair to my pussy and painted an “x” on it. She brought that bit of hair to my mouth and I sucked on it until the honeyed taste was gone. She put my hands to her hair to hold it out of her way. Again she tortured me with those lips, and her teasing tongue. I tried to force her downward but she only gave me a glare and continued in her slow methodical sips. Finally she reached the “x” and told me to hold the lips of my pussy apart for her. Now she used her teeth. She scraped and bit her way through the honey and my clit. She pushed two of her delicate fingers into me and I came, screaming, and arching into her mouth. She sucked my cum from her fingers, then used her tongue to lap every last drop from my pussy.

Smiling I reached for her, “My turn to pleasure you.” I said. She shook her head, and told me to give her a ten minute head start on the shower. I let her go, but knew I would be following as soon as the water started.










Her bathroom is like a bachelor's fantasy, all black and brushed silver. Everything was over the top and my entire apartment could fit in there. But it was the shower that held my attention, had 3 shower heads and the stall was built so you had to step up to get in. Water streaming down her body, she looked like a “pocket Venus.” She is 5 foot tall, and has wavy black hair that is streaked with silver that reaches the top of her butt. Curves, my God does the woman have curves. Her breast ( 36 DD) almost look too big for her small frame, they are pale and creamy with dusky rose nipples,. Her waist is small, even though she has a cute little tummy. Her hips flare out from her waist, just enough that she has to buy a size larger in pants than fits her waist. I love her legs, slightly muscular, they lead to the cutest little toes you can imagine.

I step into the shower and reached for her shampoo. She uses a vanilla scent that pairs well with her lemon shower gel. I stroked her scalp, lathering up the shampoo until it was all over the place, and in danger of blinding me. She laughed and turned around to rinse it out. After loading up her scrunchy, I gathered up her hair and draped it over her left shoulder. Bending down, I nibbled at the nape of her neck, the Japanese are right you know. A woman's nape is one of the sexiest parts of her body, and for her, its an erogenous zone. Her head dropped forward, giving me better access. I lingered, then slowly began washing her shoulders and back. She has narrow shoulders, but even from the back she has an hour glass figure. Kneeling down I continued down to her very bite able ass. I placed my hand between her shoulder blades and pushed until she was leaning against the far wall. I sat back on my heals and her ass was at just the right place for me to bite. So I did. Her musky scent mixed with the vanilla and lemon, making me groan. I wanted a taste, but I knew if I did, the bathing part would be over. I finished the back of her legs and had her turn toward me. Rising back to my knees, I bathed her neck, shoulders, arms and then skipped down to her stomach. I paid special attention to her belly button. I skimmed over her twat and moved on to her legs. Bending her left leg at the knee, I lifted until I could wash her foot. It was small and delicately arched. The toe nails were done in silver with black tips. I smiled thinking the black and silver theme didn't really suit her, but what the hell, if it made her happy. Then I lifted her right foot and found a silver and black dragonfly just above her instep. It was barely 2 inches long, and seemed to be emerging from her foot. I laughed with delight, then kissed it. Knowing what I wanted to do next, I nudged her toward the wall. Once she was leaning back into the wall, I placed her hands on her breast. She smiled and started pulling on her nipples. I went back to her right foot and drew her big toe into my mouth. She gasped and tried to pull her foot from my grasp. I gave her ass a smack and shook my head at her. I sucked and laved her toe paying special attention to the sensitive pad. As I drew her toe from my mouth I scraped my teeth across the pad, and she gasped again. Then I kissed my way from her foot to her knees, my hands massaging her ass the whole time. I could smell her excitement, and knew once I reached her core there would be a wealth of cream to savor. But I wanted her desperate for the little death, and she wasn't quite there. So I nipped and kissed her thighs moving slowly, making little noises of appreciation. Passing up her bush, I nuzzle her belly. Her hands came down and tangled in my hair, she pushed my face into her core.

I took slow gentle swipes at her outer lips, enjoying the smooth feel against my face. Taking my time so I could build the tension between us, I stayed away from her clit. Her taste was amazing, and addicting. Bringing my hands around I pulled her lips apart and pushed my tongue deep into her. She shuddered and bucked, her hands clenching in my hair. I kissed her long and deep, then switched to her clit, scraping and sucking until she came. After licking her clean, I moved up and kissed her mouth, sharing her essence. We stumbled from the shower and dried each other off, then fell back into bed. Tangled in each others arms we slept.

[john12345]

That was a nice one!!=)

[MissMayhem]

I liked it. Very sensual!

[Kev_North]

Great read, I enjoyed it!

[VideoBox]

What a great stories. I love lesbian actions.

[Wombatso]

Killer story.

[Abernathy]

Yumm, Any chance of there being more?

[Harmony]

It is a fantastic story, love the detail that you go into, it paints a pretty picture in mind as I am reading.
There were a few little mistakes that you could edit and apart from that you are good to go.

Thanks for sharing, you are fantastic at this