My first story
Posted Fri Sep 04, 2009 06:28 AM
He carried me to the bed room and lay me down on our bed his kissing became more urgent, he began pulling and tugging on my shirt, undoing the buttons, releasing my breasts from my suffocating bra, sliding down my skirt never once breaking the kiss. I tried to do the same to him but he stopped my hands and undressed himself with such urgency he fell off the bed when trying to kick off his trousers .I giggled. He winked. Butterflies exploded in my tummy.
After a moment to sort himself he resumed his position on top of me and started kissing me again on my lips, chin, chest, left breast, right breast. He took my right nipple in his mouth and began to suck the sensation had my back arching and my clit pulsing he repeated himself on my left nipple and a small moan escaped my mouth. Once he had finished he continued his butterfly kisses down my torso until he reached my clit. He ran his soft tongue around it, first slowly then faster and faster, he took it between his teeth and began sucking my heart was racing as he put a finger into my soaking wet pussy and started stroking my g-spot i couldn't help but let out a huge moan of pleasure. This made him smile and his actions got faster. He let go of my clit and started again circling with his tongue with an impressive speed he kept going until he took me to my first, second, third and forth orgasm by which point i pushed him round until i was on top of him and made my way down to his beautiful cock i kissed up and down his length twice until i couldn't resist taking it into my mouth licking his head ferociously whilst running my hand up and down all the shaft that didn't fit into my mouth. As could feel his balls start to tense i removed him from my mouth and sat on him in one smooth movement just in time to let his load be released into my hot pussy.
Posted Sat Sep 05, 2009 02:21 PM
Feedback would be use a paragraphs, otherwise, everything runs together.
Posted Sun Sep 06, 2009 04:42 PM
But yes, it's much easier to read.